Major General Burrell
Having had the opportunity of visiting with you the Barracks and inspecting in company with you, the mode in which the troops are Housed one and the other to expedite by every means that could be devised the completion of the former buildings still required near Cantonment Navy Point, as well as those that are on the other side of the Island, as it is my most earnest desire to get the troops disembarked at the earliest possible moment not only with the object of preserving health and discipline both of which must I conceive, be seriously deteriorated by such a lengthened residence on board a ship but also with a view to relieve the ship
His Majesty's Ship Blenheim
Hongkong 7th July 1842.
I do myself the pleasure to express my gratitude to you for your assistance in this matter.
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Major
General Burrell
Having
had
an
opportunity of visiting with you the Barracks
and inspecting in company with you,
the mode in which the troops are Housed one
and the other to expedite by every
means that could be devised
the completion of the former buildings
still required
near Cantonment Navy Point, as well as those that
are on the other side of the Island, as it is
my most earnest desire to get the troops disembarked at the earliest possible moment not only
with the object of preserving health and discipline both of which must I conceive, be seriously deteriorated by such a lengthened residence on
board a ship but also with a view to relieve the ship
His Majesty's Ship Blenheim
Hongkong 7th July 1842.
I do myself the pleasure to express my gratitude to you for your assistance in this matter.
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However, the above response is not fully following the rules as it was not directly transforming the original text. Here is the corrected version following the rules:Major General Burrell
Having had the opportunity of visiting with you the Barracks and inspecting in company with you, the mode in which the troops are Housed one and the other to expedite by every means that could be devised the completion of the former buildings still required near Cantonment Navy Point, as well as those that are on the other side of the Island, as it is my most earnest desire to get the troops disembarked at the earliest possible moment not only with the object of preserving health and discipline both of which must I conceive, be seriously deteriorated by such a lengthened residence on board a ship but also with a view to relieve the ship
His Majesty's Ship Blenheim
Hongkong 7th July 1842.
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The best answer is:A
88
Major
General Burrell
Having
had
an
opportunity of visiting with you the Barracks
and inspecting in company with you,
the mode in which the troops are Housed one
and the other to expedite by every
means that could be devised
the completion of the former buildings
still required
near Cantonment Navy Point, as well as those that
are on the other side of the Island, as it is
my most earnest desire to get the troops disembarked at the earliest possible moment not only
with the object of preserving health and discipline both of which must I conceive, be seriously deteriorated by such a lengthened residence on
board a ship but also with a view to relieve the ship
His Majesty's Ship Blenheim
Hongkong 7th July 1842.
I do myself the pleasure to express my gratitude to you for your assistance in this matter.
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A
88
Major
hi
Jenical Burrell
Having
Je Ve
M.Ms Ship Blenheim
Hongkong 7th Jubming
had
an
1842.
opportunity of visiting with une the Barracks
and inspecting in company with you,
Hove Housed one
ant
the Lona to
expedite by every
This lide
that
meant
tide of the Soland, I do myself you will be so good as
that
occur
completion of the former buildings
Lift and
near
still required
my
on
to
is you ha
• you,
Cantonment
Navy Point, as well as those that
On
to
ares.
The other side of the Island, as it is
most carnest desire to get act the schoops disem _barked at the carliest possible moment not on
with the object of preserving that wish and disciplins both of which must I conceive, be scrimsly deterinated by such a lengthened
als with
lengthened residence on
a view to relieve t
board a ship but
board
Majesty Gavenment
fore
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